Episode 4 making progress

[vladarr]

Hi friends.
In this section I will inform you about the making of the comic, episode 4 "In the Club", the adventures of Professor Clara Cox. The episode will be more demanding to create because it will contain more characters for which they need to fit in one picture. The concept of the idea for the episode is as follows (it can be changed during the making):

Main Character: Professor Clara Cox
Location: Strip Club
Number of other characters: ~80
Models made: 60
Suits for models: 0
Number of pages made: 0
Sex scene: Foursome-MFMM / Threesome MFF / Gangbang 7 males / Foursome-FFFF
Participants of the sex scene: John Hope, Clara Cox///
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If you haven't read the first 3 episodes yet, do so.
Enjoy.

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[vladarr]

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What program is required to view the story?

[vladarr]

CDisplayEx.
Please have anyone read, send compliments or criticism to help me improve future episodes. Thank you.

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CDisplayEx.
Please have anyone read, send compliments or criticism to help me improve future episodes. Thank you.

Two minor criticisms:

It appears English is not your first language as your dialog is quite "stilted" (awkward). Also, there's no need for 17 pages depicting sex in a particular position.

It'd try more hints up front suggesting where the storyline is going. Maybe some "thought bubbles" of Clara thinking about her plans/agenda and reason for agreeing to particular actions.

I'm wondering if you might have been better served creating a video/movie instead of a comic?

[vladarr]

I agree with the number of pages, for a certain pose, but the presentation of sex scenes is the main thing, along with a good story. The story will reveal itself with the next episodes. As for the making of the movie, maybe there will be some movies for the sex scenes, but for the story, I don't believe it. The reason is that I want to have more people in the frame, and I can do that only by combining the images. In the film, only 4 models fit into the frame. For episode 4, there will be a full strip club and there will be about 80 models in the episode.

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An idea:

Can you include both comic stills AND video? You might be able to condense some of your 15-page illustrations with video clips.